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16.5 Techniques for Writing: Using Specific Language

Exercise B: When you click on each "sentence" button a sentence will appear in the text area that can be greatly improved with the use of specific details. Highlight and replace the words in ALL CAPS with appropriate details.

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Answers, of course, will vary. Compare yours with those of other students. Your instructor may ask you to print out this exercise for class discussion.

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