Techniques for Writing: Return to Your Writing
Read aloud the paragraph you've been writing throughout this chapter. You wrote it in bits and pieces, and some of the parts may not fit together smoothly. Do the explanations and details work well together, and are the transitions clear? Now that you've written a conclusion, do you have a new perspective on your topic sentence? Your partner's response has given you an idea of how your paper looks in someone else's eyes. How does it look in yours now? Revise the paragraph to make it meet your own standards.