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2.1 Verbs: Your Writing: Recounting a Recent Incident or Story

Miluska Michalkiewicz: 6 February 1997

Last year we went to Aruba. It was a beautiful island, the people were very friendly, and the weather was great - hot but dry. We also went to the beach and the temperature of the water was between 85 to and 90 degrees -- just how I liked it. The people in Aruba spoke in Papiamento which is a combination of a few languages. We went into a submarine which went 150 feet deep into the ocean. It was so beautiful, it looked like we were in another world.

We are in Aruba, a beautiful island The people are very friendly, and the weather is great -- hot but dry. At the beach in Aruba the temperature of the water is between 85 to 90 degrees -- warm, just the way I like. The people in Aruba speak in Papiamento which is a combination of a few languages. We go into a submarine which goes 150 feet deep into the ocean. It is so beautiful, it seems like we are in another world.

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