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chapter 4.1 Completers: Writing

Maria Maldonado: 1 November 1996

The FIRST thing I notice is the BIG and WHITE [screen] in front of the classroom. I can also see the OLD and DIRTY [rug]. Some of the computers are [DUSTY] even though they are also NEW. Most of my classmates are [UNSOCIABLE], but there is a NICE [person] who sits next to me. When I look around the room I can feel a PEACEFUL [environment].

If I were the decorator, I would change the ROOM'S [color] because it makes it look like a BORING place, which makes it be a not INSPIRATIONAL room. But when I look through the HIGH windows, everything is [different]. The BIG trees are just [GORGEOUS]. THEIR AWESOME color seems to be the ONLY [thing] in all the landscape. THEIR FALLING leaves, covering all the ground, seem to be making a GOLD [rug]. The HAPPY birds flying from tree to tree are the PERFECT [complement]. DEFINITELY, our AMAZING Lord did a WONDERFUL [job]. We are LUCKY [people] for living in such a FANTASTIC place!

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